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Hollow talk
Rain is ink
Stains on my heart
In these crying streets
Standing still
Just as buses fade
They came and left
Nothing else to say.
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Eternity's endby giccgic

Literature / Poetry / General Poetry / Free Verse©2013-2014 giccgic
The world will carry on but not the broken-hearted.
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KittyKillsAll Dec 24, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I like it. It leaves a lot to the imagination but I feel it gives the imagination just a tiny enough push to make you really start to think about what the verses mean.
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giccgic Dec 25, 2013  Student Writer
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it!
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